Conrad Rice

This has the potential to be a good story. In order to reach that point you're going to have to change a few things. First off, description. You need to ...

Very interesting story. The continual nightmare thing was a very good twist. I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors, so that's all right. It could do with a little ...

This is a very good story. You described everything very well and got us into the main character's head. Maybe a little more description could flesh it out a bit, ...

This was good. It could have done with some more description, but since this is a flash fiction piece that can't really be held against it. It was comprehensible and ...

This was a very good piece. You could make the description a little more flowery, but this stands great without it. I agree with the previous post on the poem ...

Wow, this is a very good story. I really like how you brought it to life and got right into the main character's head, especially since I'm so bad at ...

This is a very interesting picture of the future that you paint. Some of the problems are completely understandable and forseeable, but the thing about the opressed Swedes was so ...

I totally did not see the dreaming thing coming. Very well done on that part. Though you might want to take steps to make the dream seem a bit more ...

Good story, It was about halfway through the story before I finally began to realize that Jason was dead. I also thought that Hannah was dead for a moment, but ...

This is shaping up to be a pretty good novel so far. I won't go into grammatical or spelling errors, because I didn't spot any and because I'm no good ...

This has the potential to be a very good and engaging story. That being said, some work needs to be done on it first. I found no spelling or grammatical ...

This was a very good story. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors throughout, but nothing that a little spell check can't fix. You might want to expand a ...

Very interesting and well done story. The only problem I have with it is that I am not drawn into it enough. Is it cold out. Just how brutal has ...

I liked this story. It reminded me a lot of Philip K. Dick's stories. My only problem is that I kind of got lost around the eighth, ninth, and tenth ...

This story has a lot of potential and could go quite a few places. But it needs to get on the road towards that place. This story could benefit from ...